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by tazz31709/11/12

A VOYEUR AND A LEER-ER

shyness is his fortitude until, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by greenmountaineer09/11/12

This is good. Most erotic poems posted aren't. I like what you did with the line breaks. It kept me interested in the narrative.

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by demure10109/12/12

what a lovely poem,

Dawnj. It leaves one longing to be on the receiving and of your smile.

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