Being the Maid Ch. 01

Not so romantic after all

After the lengthy intro, I was expecting something much softer. But I'm not complaining -- it is very well written. The sentences flow, characters are recognizable, and it is a believable story. The experience shows, definitely. Good work!

Good Start

A good introduction, interesting characters and unusual the way they interact with one another. Not a typical romance or non consent story, no obvious hero quite yet! Hope Bridget gets her own back at some point. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you.

By Romance I Meant...

In the overall series there's eventually going to be romance =) Not so much in this chapter. Or even in the next chapter.

Very good!

Ahh, I enjoy this type of story. :)

I enjoy the fact that I've read exactly the type of story that's happening off to the side with the Princess and lead bandit (and am typically bored by them because for being the main characters, they aren't that interesting). I laughed that they were shoved to the side and it was like, "Oh yeah...and that happened. Yeah, you know how it goes. Anyway--"

Kind of like Bridgett is actually watching a bad ravishment tale being reenacted before her.

I also enjoy stories about characters who understand more of their surroundings, have a sense of survival, some ability to read people, and the awareness to see there are multiples ways something can happen in a crisis--either before or after. Because of that, there's a level of grit inside even a naive girl that gives her better chances of surviving that one who loses all focus.

I like the fact that the three men are distinct, that there's a conflict beyond the rape that is set up based on those distinct personalities. It integrates the rape with an actual plot. ;)

An element of romance, yes, perhaps (few captives are that lucky--that's what romance is, the exceedingly lucky ones at either end of a bell curve). Mindsets like Garrett are more progressive for the implied time and and he would have to have had an upbrinding that reflected how he learned it (it doesn't come out of a vaccuum), but it has just enough practical justification for it to work.

Looking forward to Ch 2!

mmmmm Goldeniangel!

Since visiting this site you've always been a favourite author of mine! I can't wait for more of this story and how the women are going to eventually get anal fucked.

MORE!

I always luv ur stories and this is no exception. Please write more!

Great start!

Awsome take on the non-con story. You always bring an interesting viewpoint. I think this has the potential to be a new favorite. Looking forward to seeing where you take this Angel. :)

Very nice

Keep writing

Definitely...

enjoyed this story, looking forward to subsequent chapters! Keep up the good work!!

Give me more, give me more!

Very nice

Very nice Angel. I love Sam... the dirtbag. Garrett is pretty hot too. So Blaine is the quiet one...looking forward to more of him as well. ;)

Not for me

I started reading this because I've read and enjoyed so many of your other stories, but even in your hands, the non-consent/reluctance category doesn't work for me. Sexual arousal would be completely trumped by fear in Bridget's situation. I know this is just a fantasy, but I can't get over that.

Love your other work, and I'll stop reading your stories that are in this category, so as not to pollute your otherwise fine work with unhappy comments. :-)

A wonderful super-erotic start to a new story. Thank you Angel!

I think that the setting of “Being the Maid” is very clever and your 'handling' of the characters very expert. (I have a feeling that you 'handle' all of your characters, as you write, very extensively, naughty Angel!). Bridget's role is very erotic but that of the princess is almost doubly so, mainly because of the way you leave us in the dark about what Patrick is doing to her most of the time, but with 'sly' references to what might be happening, or have been happening, such as during the ride to the campsite when, presumably, she was riding, astride the saddle, in front of Patrick as was Bridget in front of Garrett. The fantasy idea of a beautiful woman with hands tied behind her back, riding astride and bouncing in front of a handsome captor during a prolonged journey on horseback is deliciously erotic. You describe it so well in so few words. The horseman has one arm free to hold her steady, pulling her back against him, almost like an embrace, as you describe it, but what of the one free hand; free to explore the wonders of the feminine form over and under her clothing during a prolonged period as they bounce along with her tied hands having nowhere to rest other than against his bouncing genitals! You had Bridget blush about that, a masterful splash of erotic colour in a black-and-white scene, with wide-ranging sexual implications. You hint at what might have happened to the gagged princess to effect a remarkable transformation in her during the ride, as noticed in her eyes and newly-restrained demeanor, by her maid. Like Bridget, she is an innocent girl who has had her bodice torn by Patrick and undoubtedly been very thoroughly anatomically (hence emotionally) explored by that free hand! She might have been carried through several orgasms during the hours of riding, considering Patrick’s dominating demeanor and access to her neck and ears with his mouth and each previously-untried tender titty and saddle-splayed unprotected clitty to mention just a few, for him, delicious possibilities. And then at the campsite I found the background fucking of the princess at least as mysteriously erotic as your vigorously, vital, profoundly moving description of the core-engagement of Bridget’s being plunged into conjunction with mighty masculinity and finding herself splendidly equal to the seemingly overwhelming challenge! What a profound revelation of magical femininity! Your stories are a wondrous celebration of femininity, masculinity and sexuality, Angel. Thank all the gods that there is a least one of you in the world...

Personally I like stories like thaat combine romancee and rough and unwillingness. I love garrett. Keep up the good work thanks

This story is so good!

It's been on my mind. I had to read it again!