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a concert outdoors

bySenna Jawa©
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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz12/12/06

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Both cute
But prefer the first;
Quite an image of somebody waking.

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by duddle14612/15/06

Ethereal beauty.

Natures beautiful images are used to good advantage to bring forth this beautiful poetic Masterpiece. So delicate ~ so lovely.

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by tazz31706/09/12

THE OAK BOYS AND THEIR SONGS

turn music of leaves in symphonies. TK U MLJ LV NV

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