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I like this
Two lines that are straight forward and in thought and language - with a predictable association (to heaven). And then the last line: full of contractions and alternative spellings, and a conclusion that is not what one would expect. It makes you wonder why the exception: because in heaven he would not be conscious of the sight? That being dead wouldn't be "heavenly"? That he doesn't belong in heaven? Or something else entirely? Hmmmm....and all in three lines!
one more thought
Capitalization on Blue Skies: is this a reference to the song, I wonder? Which is rather hoppy happy like.
A CHANGE IN LIFE
will alter thinking and perception, TK U MLJ LV NV
a nice idea -
I do get a little confused by the double negation (except + not)
I see
Why you hate on me lol
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