Worms

You have

a gift for innovative plot and good dialog.
Thanks...

Wow

That... was, umm... different but very good.

very interesting

I like vore and this was a very different point of view, needed more sex and a more detailed description of it but it was fun anyway, thanks.

Nice.

Ha, I liked this. The worm action could have been a tad longer and more graphic. I liked how you ended James' fate, I thought for sure you'd have killed him.

Okay, that was fun.
This sounds like a good start to a novel or something, so, thanks!

Much less fucked up than expected

That did a 180 from horific guro to lighthearted monstergirl romance. I was expecting to feel dirty and not get any sleep, and instead it made me smile. Good work.
Though I'd have to say the writing felt a bit rushed.