All Comments on 'Worms'

by Feotakahari

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sailandoarsailandoarover 11 years ago
You have

a gift for innovative plot and good dialog.

Thanks...

jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenover 11 years ago
Wow

That... was, umm... different but very good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
very interesting

I like vore and this was a very different point of view, needed more sex and a more detailed description of it but it was fun anyway, thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice.

Ha, I liked this. The worm action could have been a tad longer and more graphic. I liked how you ended James' fate, I thought for sure you'd have killed him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Okay, that was fun.

This sounds like a good start to a novel or something, so, thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Much less fucked up than expected

That did a 180 from horific guro to lighthearted monstergirl romance. I was expecting to feel dirty and not get any sleep, and instead it made me smile. Good work.

Though I'd have to say the writing felt a bit rushed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Fun fun fun.

Fun fun fun.

LittleKayLittleKayover 5 years ago
That ending

Simple, terrifying and hilarious. What a fucked up dream you had!

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