I really like your story and the characters are really amazing. All I just wish is that Dahl is with Selena, I mean Faith is okay too but my devotion still goes to Dahl & Selena. Selfish, I know. hahaha!
I've been working my way through this wonderful story for 2 days now, and i gigured Id take the time at approximatley he halfway point to share some of my thoughts. first of all, this is a wonderful world you have created. The mixxed mythologies and blending of scifi and fantasy is awsome. You have created charachters that are easy to care about, and a compelling storyline. My only very very minor beef is that the sexual aspects are toned down. With that being said, once this wonderful work is finished and has been up for a few months, I really do think that you might want to look at getting this published.
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Fascinating story
I really like your story and the characters are really amazing. All I just wish is that Dahl is with Selena, I mean Faith is okay too but my devotion still goes to Dahl & Selena. Selfish, I know. hahaha!
Great work.
I've been working my way through this wonderful story for 2 days now, and i gigured Id take the time at approximatley he halfway point to share some of my thoughts. first of all, this is a wonderful world you have created. The mixxed mythologies and blending of scifi and fantasy is awsome. You have created charachters that are easy to care about, and a compelling storyline. My only very very minor beef is that the sexual aspects are toned down. With that being said, once this wonderful work is finished and has been up for a few months, I really do think that you might want to look at getting this published.
Now the stories comes together :)
I was forgetting who some of these people are ;)
Great story! It's like western/medieval meets 26th century
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