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A Tangled Web

byTatonka©
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by Anonymous

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by camo198009/14/12

A great start, can't wait to read what happens next!

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by kathy2b4609/14/12

MORE

more

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by digdaddyrich09/15/12

A bit short even for a start

So far there's a base for the storyline or theme to build on, and for the characters to be developed.

I'll be looking for the next chapter.

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by Eric_Shift09/15/12

Too soon, too abrupt an end.

Keep going

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by Anonymous09/16/12

AWESOME

WOW DON'T STOP HERE GO ON WITH THE REST OF THE STORY CHAPTER 2

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by Anonymous09/16/12

Wow

Your writing is outstanding, very detailed. Stop teasing us and finish what you started!

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by RecHiker09/17/12

Excellent beginning!

I found chapter 2 of your story first, so I went to your story list and read this chapter before moving on to chapter 2. You have a very nice build up for your story line and you did an excellent job creating your characters.

I gave you 5 stars for this chapter. Thank you for sharing this very nice story.

Now, I'm ready to move on to chapter 2.

RecHiker

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by bigboy114509/01/14

Hurry

Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

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