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Mini lol....Lol and LOL!
Talk about a reverse of karma! A little short but good none the less...
The beginning of the story was fine - and the end was too. But the transition between the two parts should have been a matter of several months and thus several chapters.
What a waste of an interesting concept to do it this way, because all you achieve is having the reader snigger at the silly unreal idea of a prudish guy suddenly asking for DP and becoming a porn star just like that.
Rewrite the story to explain the change over a long time (I can just imagine him blushing and trying to avoid watching all the hot sex scenes, but being too fascinated to help himself, and all the flirting he gets hit by), and you'll have a sure winner.
Uhmm excuse me?
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/336752/1/th e-exo-porn-series-smut-exo-hunhan-kray-taoris-baek yeol-kaisoo/18
Somebody made this story. I was just getting paranoid because its the exact same wording just different names. I just wanted to make sure that you're aware of that. ^^;
Worked for me
Enjoyed it as much as Julian - let's see him triple fucked on film again.
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