All Comments on 'Prom is a Bitch'

by ToniNewellcd

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fireguy365fireguy365over 11 years ago
Story is a Bitch!

WTF! This could have been a good story but it's just an introduction to a story. Maybe you should have save it until you had a story to share. It's kind of like picking up a magazine with a great cover only to find all the pages inside are blank, it's a let-down, a waste of time and a tease.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Yes, and?

Nice beginning, hope you deliver more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
nice lead in

will be interesting to see where this goes

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
A Promising Prom

You have the beginning of a good prom story with wins all around.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
good start

now as it continues you need to go thru the humliations of being even more feminized and eventually his/her having sex as a sissy boi and his becoming his total sissy girlfriend and performing all associated sexual activity

mumblegooseeggmumblegooseeggover 11 years ago
I agree somewhat with fireguy365

You could have avoided any criticism by just adding "Pt. 1" to the title.

That being said, it has all the promise of a crackin good story, so I gave it 4 stars. I hope I can give 5 to the next instalment!

JimPooleyJimPooleyover 11 years ago
Good but..

It sounds promising but it's barely half a page. I'd wait till you have something substantial before posting the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I agree with what was said

It's a good start but really, wait until you have like 5-6x as much before you release another chapter. Otherwise at this rate you'll just lose your readers before you even get to the good stuff. Assuming you do eventually get to the good stuff.

pammycakes13pammycakes13over 11 years ago
Fabulous!!

as a sissy, i just love this story so far, can't wait for more!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
more more

More please

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I love this story,please finish it.

I love this story,please finish it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Way too short.

That was amazing but way too short. I wouldn't even consider that a chapter. Upload a lot more text time.

lleannelleanneover 11 years ago
Yes I will have some more please

Great start. I can see where it may lead. Please keep them coming and a little longer would be good too.

Joannemitchell67Joannemitchell67over 11 years ago
Fun fun fun

Also as a dresser I love it too. Can relate to this completely. I went to an all boys school and was part of a musical production. Six of us "had to be" girls, let's just say that I fully embraced the oppurtunity. I was in no hurry to change out of those pretty old 1950s dresses after rehearsal. :-)

Joanne

TurningintoCDTurningintoCDover 11 years ago
hot start

I would have loved to go as my best friend's prom date when I was in high school! It would have been so hot. Please keep this story coming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Like a proper girl she better be wearing a thong to prom!

griffin57griffin57over 11 years ago
possibilities

As was said before, readers need more of a comitment. It's ok to reveal slowly, but enough with the appetizer, bring on the main course. You do have a nice style though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
With haste!

Release the second chapter already!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Hurry up already

we are waiting the next chapter

Carrier_VioletCarrier_Violetover 11 years ago
Couple days?

Well I am really looking forward to this story. Left it at such a promising point leading to a hilarious shopping experience. Can just imagine the sales people face when they ask to try on dresses!! Please give us something?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
ACK

THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL. Seriously. I cannot wait for the next chapter! So great~ SQUEE I just love male cross dressers.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Time Limit ???

What happened to your time limit man ?? You mentioned your next publication will be coming in a couple of days and now its almost a year. Hurry up man, looking forward to the next installment with great gusto.

johnstang2johnstang2over 10 years ago
Where is the promised chapter 2?????

Here is the first criticism - be true to your statements. geez.

I gave this a 5 out of 5 btw.

I enjoyed every last part of it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Chapter 2 NOW!!!!

Please write the second part, it sounds so good and it needs to be continued.

BrendaNWBrendaNWover 10 years ago
please do chapter 2

please finish chapter 2 .. and maybe more.. you are imaginative and write very well and have me hooked.. I am just like Anthony :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Looking forward to the 2nd!.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
More, Please

I'd like some more, please.

usmclassusmclassover 8 years ago
I gave it 3....only because it needs to be finished. .

I want this to go on....many pages worth. I fell in love with MY best friend. ... granted opposite gender...at the time. That's the very best romance. Mine ran 40 years.... and yes, I see this as a strong possibility for this story.

ladykiller4ruladykiller4ruabout 8 years ago
Sequel Please!!!!!

Welll my one hand is on the pecker thinking of all the possible scenarios. So a sequel to the story would be highly appreciated at this point.

CdSissy123CdSissy123over 7 years ago
A couple of days?

I'm not saying it's been four years... BUT IT'S BEEN FOUR YEARS! Give us a sequel already, please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Plz make more i need to know what happens

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Please

Hi there please find the time and craft to write some more of this delicious tale . It’s started so well please don’t leave us hanging.

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 2 years ago

I hope you are well, and that life got interesting and enchanting, and that is why you've never come back to this excellent story starter.

TabuLuv187TabuLuv187over 1 year ago

Great start to the story can’t wait for more!

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