WTF! This could have been a good story but it's just an introduction to a story. Maybe you should have save it until you had a story to share. It's kind of like picking up a magazine with a great cover only to find all the pages inside are blank, it's a let-down, a waste of time and a tease.
Nice beginning, hope you deliver more!
will be interesting to see where this goes
You have the beginning of a good prom story with wins all around.
now as it continues you need to go thru the humliations of being even more feminized and eventually his/her having sex as a sissy boi and his becoming his total sissy girlfriend and performing all associated sexual activity
You could have avoided any criticism by just adding "Pt. 1" to the title.
That being said, it has all the promise of a crackin good story, so I gave it 4 stars. I hope I can give 5 to the next instalment!
It sounds promising but it's barely half a page. I'd wait till you have something substantial before posting the next chapter.
It's a good start but really, wait until you have like 5-6x as much before you release another chapter. Otherwise at this rate you'll just lose your readers before you even get to the good stuff. Assuming you do eventually get to the good stuff.
as a sissy, i just love this story so far, can't wait for more!!!!
I love this story,please finish it.
That was amazing but way too short. I wouldn't even consider that a chapter. Upload a lot more text time.
Great start. I can see where it may lead. Please keep them coming and a little longer would be good too.
Also as a dresser I love it too. Can relate to this completely. I went to an all boys school and was part of a musical production. Six of us "had to be" girls, let's just say that I fully embraced the oppurtunity. I was in no hurry to change out of those pretty old 1950s dresses after rehearsal. :-)
I would have loved to go as my best friend's prom date when I was in high school! It would have been so hot. Please keep this story coming!
Like a proper girl she better be wearing a thong to prom!
As was said before, readers need more of a comitment. It's ok to reveal slowly, but enough with the appetizer, bring on the main course. You do have a nice style though.
Release the second chapter already!
we are waiting the next chapter
Well I am really looking forward to this story. Left it at such a promising point leading to a hilarious shopping experience. Can just imagine the sales people face when they ask to try on dresses!! Please give us something?
THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL. Seriously. I cannot wait for the next chapter! So great~ SQUEE I just love male cross dressers.
What happened to your time limit man ?? You mentioned your next publication will be coming in a couple of days and now its almost a year. Hurry up man, looking forward to the next installment with great gusto.
Here is the first criticism - be true to your statements. geez.
I gave this a 5 out of 5 btw.
I enjoyed every last part of it.
Please write the second part, it sounds so good and it needs to be continued.
please finish chapter 2 .. and maybe more.. you are imaginative and write very well and have me hooked.. I am just like Anthony :)
Looking forward to the 2nd!.
I'd like some more, please.
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