All Comments on 'Dogging Delights Ch. 01'

by KittyThornbush

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
It's OK...

but it's hardly a story yet. A chapter needs more than this.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
YOU HAVENT REACH "GO" YET

still time to change your mind and alter the future, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
What!...

A start. The mind was already at the car window ... hips preesing hard against the bodywork. Please continue

RecHikerRecHikerover 11 years ago
Interesting start

I wish there had been more to this chapter but I am intrigued with the premise. I would like to read more to see how this plays out.

RecHiker

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Dogger

Totally unrealistic . Sorry but it could have been good . I am azregular dogger and this situation just would not happen .

Gaffer

JJ_KnockersonJJ_Knockersonover 11 years ago
Great beginning

Evocative, interesting, please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
So very hot

I have to ask for more. Dogging has always been something that has, well, dogged me. I mean, I really would like to be able to release myself and fool around with some guys at a car park. My husband dared me, but I just couldn't. But I get so hot and bothered thinking about it. More please.

michelleanne100michelleanne100almost 11 years ago

You have a fantastic opening for your story. You have captured the attention of people who are longing for the rest of your story. Your tease gives you an opportunity to capture our souls. Please don't disappoint!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Fabulous Beginning; Please Continue!

Good solid writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
horny

It was interesting and I would love to read the rest ofit. Really a turn on Mmmmmm

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