by KittyThornbush
still time to change your mind and alter the future, TK U MLJ LV NV
A start. The mind was already at the car window ... hips preesing hard against the bodywork. Please continue
I wish there had been more to this chapter but I am intrigued with the premise. I would like to read more to see how this plays out.
RecHiker
Totally unrealistic . Sorry but it could have been good . I am azregular dogger and this situation just would not happen .
Gaffer
I have to ask for more. Dogging has always been something that has, well, dogged me. I mean, I really would like to be able to release myself and fool around with some guys at a car park. My husband dared me, but I just couldn't. But I get so hot and bothered thinking about it. More please.
You have a fantastic opening for your story. You have captured the attention of people who are longing for the rest of your story. Your tease gives you an opportunity to capture our souls. Please don't disappoint!
It was interesting and I would love to read the rest ofit. Really a turn on Mmmmmm