You use too many adjatives to describe her big tittiesand too much baby talk for my personal taste. The story was hot as hell, but your writing needs work.
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Your writing needs work
You use too many adjatives to describe her big tittiesand too much baby talk for my personal taste. The story was hot as hell, but your writing needs work.
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