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The Spider and the Fly

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by Anonymous09/17/12

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Loved the way the older woman came on to the guy

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by Anonymous09/17/12

Could do better...

""Loved the way the older woman came on to the guy""
Strange, that's what I hated about it!! It was all too quick, no seduction whatsoever. A fumbling teenage fantasy that a woman will simply open her legs because someone looks at her. A bit more time spent on the woman getting to know him, and seducing him properly would have lead to an erotic story, rather than a simple wank fest...

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