Bazzza, where have you been? We've missed you. I hope this means you will be gracing us with more of your superb stories real soon. As usual, this one is outstanding.
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Anonymous09/17/12
Nicely done
There is something about the uncertainty of freshly meeting that just grabs me.
Great little story, just enough detail for its length and it flowed well. The epilogue was a very nice touch with a vignette all of its own.
Thank you for posting!
English
Wonderful!
Bazzza, where have you been? We've missed you. I hope this means you will be gracing us with more of your superb stories real soon. As usual, this one is outstanding.
Nicely done
There is something about the uncertainty of freshly meeting that just grabs me.
Great line.
If you look up at the notches in the headboard, every one of them is from a satisfied lover who has experienced multiple orgasms in this very bed."
Georgia raised her eyes, "There's no notches in the headboard."
"Shit, isn't there, I must be a lousy lover too."
GREAT set of lines-well done!
Enjoyable story
What a fun, short, romantic story. I like how you used the young girl to break the ice. Very believable. Look forward to more stories in the future.
Lovely story with good characters and some lively dialog, most of it in bed. Just had to give it five stars for the happy ending.
Great one.. thanks and
welcome back.... please write for us more often.
Thank you!
It was a happy reading :)
Only seven reviews and less than 10k views so far for this story? Man, these are unbelievable stats for such a great story.
Well, I really liked what I've read and wish to thank you for sharing this story with us.
Great Story
Great story. Captures the New Zealand sense of humour perfectly.
Loved it
I truly enjoyed reading this. Very well written and steamy as all hell!!!
xxxhugsxxx
One of the best on
Literotica.
i love people watching too
liked the easy banter between the two and knowing the places you mentioned, gets more points.
Very Nice!
Great little story, just enough detail for its length and it flowed well. The epilogue was a very nice touch with a vignette all of its own.
Thank you for posting!
Nice one.
Thanks, a nice romance with realistic characters. Enjoyed the fun family ending too.
I love a romantic story
that leaves you with a smile
thanks
smiles!
A nice, gentle romance. Well done and thankyou.
anyone (everyone) who likes a sweet romantic love story
should read this one
Nice story
Really nice story, maybe a little short, but lovely.
5* for you.
I apologize for my English, is not my native language.
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