All Comments on 'To the Palace Ch. 01'

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Shadow_IncubusShadow_Incubusover 11 years ago
good start

It's pretty good, maybe a bit short but it could work.

CuberRoxFoxCuberRoxFoxover 11 years ago
wonderful

Even though it was short and sweet I still loved the plot and detail, it def made me wet

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