My Sister's Diary Ch. 01

present time

in this series, please tell us you plan on including either his revenge on his former friends, or a way he joins in, i suspect the former, but its your story.

This is not a mind control story,

because there was no mind to control. And please do go for the brother's revenge, because he should not have ever let his friends near such and empty headed child.

@2ndAnom

This is Mind Control. It can take many forms. Here it is more like 'suggestions' rather than, 'I say do stuff and u do it'. If you'd noticed, the sister originally didn't want to have sex, but one of the guys told her that she loved it, and then she did.

Still, there should be more development. Less summary and more dialogue.

please continue!

This is THE BEST....a mind control from the controllee's perspective, this is fantastic; surprised no nipple play or more intense orgasms from her own side of it since she's been ordered to love it so much but for the love of god GIVE ME MORE!

Stone

Rubbish...

Interesting Story

I said it was interesting simply due to a lack of choice of a better description for now. I will wait to see how this story pans out. I will admit curiosity as to why his sister has not fallen pregnant in the last 4 months. While the instruction given to her it was not necessary for her brother's mates, this was only implied, thus with her perception altered, theoretically she did not seek future protection.

Just an idle thought.....~

reminiscent of "Chemistry of a Good Idea"

Good first chapter, hope it is continued.

Please Continue!

The Bad part of this stories is why the hell you(the writer) not yet continue it?

Overall,i give my standing applause to you

Things will get much easier once Tom's mother is convinced that this is all a great idea and also takes part.

more please

perfect

it is one of the best story i ever read i hope it will continue

Wonderful.

In fact the first story I ever ejaculated to, and I've read hundreds.

Please give us the other parts quickly.

superb start

Still waiting

Fantastic tale, I am hoping for many more diary entries. It will be interesting when she happily starts whoring herself out to make beer money for Craig and his friends.

Idea

Interesting, how about for a twist the brother finds out the formula- tests it on his mother and makes her his sex slave- and then uses it to make his sister his slave "altering her original orders". After some planning he humiliates his "friends" by controlling them and uses them to make extra money.

From ass to pussy with no cleaning in between??????

That is where you lost me. Just went from there to the end without reading further.

Revenge of brother

Oh but you obviously forgot the best part where he catches them one at a time.And here's how it all falls out he hunts them down works them over with a baseball bat .Oh yeah that's just the beginning he get's the drug to fix sis, kicks there damn teeth out and fucks them.How You dooren

PS, I gave you five

I gave you five stars because I enjoyed my little comment but believe me I wasn't shitting you in my comment .I am getting a little old but have always been been a dangerous enemy.Vicious in defense of family.Come on finish it up