by Brandie69
So different from your last story, but so hot and erotic!
I'm coming down firmly on the side of liking this chapter. Deftly explores the inner struggle between reason and desire. And does so with a seemingly effortless writing style that draws the reader into the story. I really like this character.
I have to agree with pg240's words, love your writing. cant wait for another ch. in this delectable story.
loved it and your writing.. brought back so many wonderful memories for me
I can only hope you have as much fun writing your stories as your fans do reading them. You're truly a treasure, my dear.
I've made previous comments before on your writing and about this particular story series. All good of course. Anything else I could say is just repeating myself. I really enjoying reading your stories. How you make the characters believeable. Did I mention HOT!
The newest chapter just went up this morning :)
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I've enjoyed this series. Great story. I just wish I could write as well as you.
Many years ago in my first experiences with another man I was once with a friend. We were enjoying mutual discoveries. We were doing a 69, our first I think, he came and I was so into it that I swallowed it all without noticing and continued sucking. Shit my first cum swallow and I didn't even tasted it. Haha!
In fiction and sometimes in real life, a person can fall in love and over time watch it die. However, the love between a parent and child may change but never dies. Love does what it wants. It has no boundaries only people do. A mature, self-aware and self-assured person can love more than one person at a time in as many ways as possible. Mother and son are lucky to have each other.