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too short.
It was a good story, but I would have enjoyed it being a bit longer. Surely the actual sex could have been more than 1 paragraph!
It is a good situation, though. (And surely there are far worse things that could be said about your writing than "there's not enough of it"!)
Great twist
I really enjoyed it, love how the mistaken identity played out, completely changed the point of view for the reader. Found the ending funny and lighthearted.
Would love to see more, great job!
Very good piece
Please don't keep us hanging too long for the next encounter
This story has it all, prikled the hairs on my neck, great ending, sexy, very erotic and edgy, brilliant, please do a second part soon.
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