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Revenge (Parallel Universe) Day 05

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/18/12

Hilarious!

Ray is such an great anti-hero and this story just has me laughing out loud. Keep it up!

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by Anonymous09/18/12

What a great series

Love your work and this latest series is hilarious can't wait for the next chapters

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by aerobooby09/19/12

This series seems rushed and lacks the great descriptive commentary you useually put effort into.

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by Anonymous10/04/12

Funny!

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