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Wow
Hot !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Teasing and so fullfilling
I feel there is going to be a few more chapters to this story and somehow the husband of one will become the meat in the sandwich. Well that is where I would want to be anyway. Thanks for this hot little story.
Classy
I like the feel of Gatsby in this story. The writing is subtle but erotic. Please keep submitting as you can. Looking forward to more.
Ambivalence
This well written story left me with a definite sense of ambivalence. The depth of affection between the two lesbian lovers is so great--and so well described--that one hates to think it might end, yet doubts arise that it can endure after the marriage.
The story cries out for a sequel.
But on second thought perhaps it is best to let the reader formulate his own contiuation of the affair.....
Hot!
Very well done. I dont normally go for lesbian stuff, but Im glad I came across this gem.
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