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by Anonymous

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by demure10109/17/12

Very effective

This does succeed in making my hair stand on end!

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by twelveoone09/17/12

5ed

blacker than their eyes and souls,
you have a problem here, it does sound bad (the ominous panda effect), i was going to suggest darker (which isn't quite as bad) but i see what you are doing with red

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by tazz31709/17/12

HOW DOES ONE MEASURE LIGHTENING

or describe a soul, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Ashesh909/18/12

Tazz :--

How do you spell Lightning ???

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by greenmountaineer09/18/12

Frightening, although I would have omitted "their" in the last line (faster tempo like a bullet).

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