Tell Me You Love Me Ch. 06

At least there is a hint of a "happily ever after" with Tom.

Great Story DUDE!!

great characters and story!!

thanks for finishing this. loved it from the start.

Wonderful...

ending. Very realistic and smoothly played. Excellent story. I hated to see it end.

~AvrgBlkGrl

Perverted rubbish !

Real bad this. 1 star.

nice ending

Totally loved this start to finish. Thanks. :)

LOVED IT! PLEASE CONTINUE! I LOVE THE CHARACTERS ESPECIALLY TOM!!!!! Make a sequel or something please...

This is perfect!

This is perfect! A love story, in the end. Yeah, now I love you.

Nice!

Didn't want it to end!

Perfect ending

I loved this story and it had the perfect ending! I cried.

It would take too many words to describe how it moved me. I agree with Biotechgirl. Perfect ending.

Thank you both

I'm glad you enjoyed!

Gesh, this was just fantastic. You have a real career in writing... If you want one. I can't remember my password or I wouldn't have been anonymous. But thank you for sharing your creatvity!

Huh

This website is my one vice. I was not expecting to find actual compelling and thought provoking prose on it. Thanks.

Excellent Story

So much of what I've read on Literotica is crude, porno trash. This, however was exceptionally well written in every respect. I loved it.

Best I've Read on Literotica

I can't get over how good this was. I've only recently started reading stuff on Literotica, and the quality of writing is all over the place. But something about your writing makes it so easy to read, so natural. I literally skipped the Cat and Allison scene the first time around just to read what happened with Cat and Tom. I was THAT invested in the characters in their relationship. I thought the ending was excellent and really captured the chemistry between them. Of course I wouldn't mind if you continued the story, just because I like the characters so much, but it might also ruin the ending. I'm sure you'd be up to the task!

I do wish there would have been a couple more moments between Cat and Tom that not only displayed his lust for her, but his desperate need to be with her. The time he came to the house tired, and asked for two cups of water. "I'm not up for lassoing the moon today" (It's A Wonderful Life!) I would have loved that scene if he just paid her, but didn't ask for sex. Maybe Tom just asked her to sit there with him, watching tv as they cuddled. Maybe he just caresses her as they talk. You write the actual sex scenes so well that I feel you could throw more subtle moments like that, without boring the reader. Of course I'm not judging how you wrote it at all. I love how the story is now, but I guess I'm just projecting my own desires into the story.

The scene with the Tennis Coach fantasy was perfect to me, because even though it was hot and steamy, the way they were conversing felt so natural, and it felt like they were getting to know each other.

Anyways, I commend you Mister_Shy, thanks for the excellent read!

Just excellent...

...and head and shoulders above most of the writing here. Keep up the good work!

I was initially intrigued but quickly fell in love with this story! I thoroughly enjoyed it. Loved the sexy/kinkyness of all the chapters, thanks for writing an awesome story!

Fantastic!

Absolutely brilliant.

Fantastic

Read the whole series. I now wish to read everything you have ever written. Short stories, poetry, third grade essays, grocery lists, lay it on me.

Huh. Well... I... Huh.

Honestly? Not sure what to think of that ending. There are very faint undertones of things not being quite right. (Does anyone else think Tom is professionally involved with some rather shady business?) But the conclusion did have a sweetness to it that I enjoyed. I was definitely rooting for the pair to hook up at the end.

I think this reminds me of the final scene of 'The Graduate.' It has that whole feeling of "yay we did it! Wait, what did we just do? OMG..." I wish the pair the best, but something tells me the story is far from over for Catherine and Tom.

Excellent Writing

Incredibly descriptive, excellent imagery, really enter into psychology of Catherine, marvelously entertaining. Keep writing, I'll keep reading.