On Top of a Mountain Ch. 04

Well, well, well

What an interesting way to end the story. Shame on her and her guy for keeping their cheating quiet though and make him feel like the schmuck. A fiance and best friend still should have more respect or at least be a friend enough to tell him he was not the only one. I give you a 3 because I did keep coming back.

Believable ending but cliche

The ending made sense but was cliche. So much for love and the fact that she thinks mick is wanting to be with her. Will she tell gary that mick is the other guy or let mick try to move in on rose?

The bitch should have come clean like he did.

i think the endind sucked worse then them cheating. he should have come back and found out then had a blow-up with them both. to find out that his best friend fucked his fiance later will make him look like a pussy that couldnt keep her. plus how does he know that some bitch in rome will still want him when he finaaly gets back.

be aware of the cheaters

she cheated on gray with mick.you do the math.

How bizarre was that?

You should go back to writing stories about fucking your relatives - you sure as hell can't do romance.

Sorry but I hate the ending. I loved the other chapters but was kinda pissed when this was how it ended.

YOU STINK

WTF, NOT EROTIC OR SENSUAL AND LOUSY WRITING. QUIT WRITING, EVERYTHING HERE IS DEPRESSING AND A BIG DOWNER.