All Comments on 'Very Fragile! Handle with care!'

by MaitreNuit

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
What a lovely story

Very empathic, very sad and romantic.

Great written. I never been reading such a thing before.

Thank you

rodeorider58rodeorider58over 11 years ago
One of the Best

Absolutely one of the best stories I've read! Great story . Just fantastic

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Beautiful

Awesome. Brought tears to my eyes as I remembered my grief some time back.

I hope God gives you strength to go on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
You made me cry! And I hate to cry!

What an amazing story. I had to read it twice, swallowing a lot of tears. You have captured the emotions and the tragedy of the events so brilliantly, I felt like I was witnessing it.

Tough stuff, made even me as a man weep like a baby.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Amazing!

The Best i have read on Lit.

I Love it.

Ava39Ava39over 11 years ago
Great story

In english just as well as in german. I like the english version much.

Kisses

Ava

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Proof reading?

It is a pity when a beautiful story like this is not properly proof-read.

Or could it be that the author cannot distinguish between to lie and to lay?

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
SOMEWHERE SUN IS SHINING...PEOPLE SHOUTING

not HIM.the finally struck the final out, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Touching and Melancholy

In spite of the sometimes labored and awkward wording and grammar in translation, the feelings came through throughout and overcame these problems. Poetic license extends to translation when the words are so clearly from the heart. Jon Taylor

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
You touched my heart

Wow, amazing. Hearts splinter, that´s right.

I like it.

Fledermaus1963Fledermaus1963over 11 years ago
Melancholy and beautiful

As Always a great job Maitre. I love both versions.

klara18klara18over 11 years ago
amazing

This so totally my favorite story overall from you

Klara

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Touching me very well

Great written. I was sad at the end. Is he dead?

herbstblume1112herbstblume1112over 11 years ago
you are talented

Romance is yours.

Please write more in this categorie.

FreddyKruegerFreddyKruegerover 11 years ago
Romance is good

you wrote it very well.

I will still know wether he is dead ;-(

Freddy

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
wow

great!! too bad she lost something that could have been so special.

Scorpio44Scorpio44over 11 years ago
Well done!

Your style and story telling skills are unique here. This cautionary tale should be required reading for all those in high school cliques.

Thank you.

MaitreNuitMaitreNuitover 11 years agoAuthor
I want to thank you all

I'm glad you liked this story, too.

I'm aware, I'm not a native speaker and no editing can be perfect. Things like "lay" vs. "lie" may slip, but as long as the story remains readable and understandable, there isn't much damage done.

@ Freddy

He is dead! No doubt about it.

@ anonymous 10

The story is depressing, sad and - agreed - not erotic... But don't you dare to dictate others what they have to consider romantic. I do think, some of them share my point of view that romance don't require necessarily a happy end.

@ all

Thank you once again.

Your

MaitreNuit

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

beautiful

SithLord6969SithLord6969almost 5 years ago
wow...

Just fucking wow...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
HOLY SHIT

that is SO SAD and SO GOOD. Kinda embarrassing to say, but totally Made my chest hurt. Never take anything for granted.

but how did he die? That’s what I wanna know

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
To the anonymous guy who wanted to know how he died

I'm not 100% sure but I think it is clearly implied that he commited suicide seeing he died on the same day(valentines, 14 Feb) that the girl broke his heart

RanDog025RanDog025over 1 year ago

Wow, people can be so cruel 5 BIG FAT FLAMING STARS and a thank you!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

A sad story, well written. It's too late. She missed her chance.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

He may have died by his own hand.

But SHE'S the one who killed him.

Now she gets to lived with that knowledge for the rest of her life.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Very good

Anonymous
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