Being the Maid Ch. 02

Oh, bravo!

Very much enjoying this, and excellent fantasy. (I don't mind the anachronisms at all!)

And as before, all characters are distinct, our heroine has some common sense, and the sex is hot, and we're still left with tension and the promise of conflict. I definitely want to continue reading the story.

I love your story as I have loved many you wrote .But i hope you dont loose your enthusiasm for it.As one of your readers pointed out on one of your other stories ,' there is a feeling its incomplete' . I agree.The sex scenes are always perfect and lack no enthusiasm, I think the problem is the plot. Its there ,but you dont focus on it as much as it deservs.Anyway it easier to be a critic ,then a writer lol .Keep up the good work I cant wait to read more of your new story.

In luv!

This is a wonderful story!Please continue!

A medieval buttplug?

How realistic. NOT. One star for incompetence.

Dear Previous Commentor

Either you didn't read the author's note at the beginning of the chapter or you didn't bother to look up what anachronistic means.

Anachronistic: The representation of someone as existing or something as happening in other than chronological, proper, or historical order.

So yes. A medieval buttplug. And I still made it a little less anachronistic by making it out of the materials that were at hand during that time period. And, also, I warned you. One star big whoop. Thanks for letting me know. I must rush and change the entire chapter do to one inept reader.

Everyone else - thanks for the constructive comments. And I will definitely try to work on the plot... the interesting thing about this piece is that at first there's so much LESS plot and character development to do at the beginning but that has to come around by the end to get it where I want it to go. I'm looking forward to the challenge, def let me know what you think!

In answer to the comment about the buttplug...

There have been phalluses and butt plugs around for ages and in the beginning of time.
The ancient Greeks, Romans and so forth. Egyptians and in India...where many of the "oils" we enjoy today came from. Ready your history and do some research before commenting on something you know nothing about.

Even the Victorian era had such items to prepare women (wives) for Kings and noblemen.

Thanks Pie =)

I know the plug was still a little out of place because the setting is in Northern Europe, but I was thinking about doing some whole story about Garrett's travels or something and I hadn't gotten around to researching exactly where all the fun sexy stuff of the time period might have come from and now I have a place to start! Thanks =)

Anonymous who thinks sex toys are only found in current culture....

Sex toys did not begin with modern day rubber and latex. Mankind has been using erotic devices from the beginning. Dildos (shaped like a penis) have been discovered in Upper Paleolithic art that was created more than 30,000 years ago.

During the Victorian Era(1837 to 1901), butt plugs in the shape of wooden eggs were invented by an European doctor. They were prescribed to “help prevent loss of sperm through wasteful ejaculation”. The eggs supposedly helped send semen back to the female reproductive organs. They believed that by plugging the anus, sperm loss would be alleviated. (Bing and Google are great ways to verify by the way)

So you need to read a little before assuming that there's no way a butt plug could be realistic for this story. She never listed a time specific time period.

So you keep on Goldeniangel! I can totally see a butt plug for back in the day!

I love all of your stories Goldeniangel!

I stumbled on this story by accident, and when I saw who the author was I knew I had to read it. I'm glad that I have, I don't know which direction this story will go in but I'm a lover not a fighter so I would love to see Garrett, Blaine and Sam as her lovers and not her tormentors. I know, I know, that's probably what you don't have in mind with the exception of Garrett but, I still think it would be great if they all were happy together. And yes, sex toys were available to people since the ancient times, sometimes they were orginally intended for medical purposes but their uses evolved and now we have toys!
But, keep up the good work author lady, you're doing a spectacular job!

hot!

Great new story!

Just simply amazing! Thank you.....

Training of a maid.

It sounds like she is starting to like it.
Can't wait to see what they have instore for her and the princess next.