Don't Say No

This is an abomination of unerotic teenage slasher crap....

...and you are going to get detention. When you're old enough.

Agree with Pete

This was not scary, just gross nonconsentual rape and murder. Maybe it belongs in nonconsentual category, but under horror, I had to give it 1 of 5.

Worse than garbage

This story is a piece of trash there is nothing erotic about it.

Horrible

I didn't rate it because it didn't deserve it. This is grotesque murder. What kind of mind thinks like this? I hope and pray there is noone out there who takes your words to heart.

I'm just kind of wondering where she got the pen. And why she didn't shove it in his eye...

Saying you hope this story does not cause someone to try this is ridiculous. If someone repeats this in real life, guess what hon, it wasn't the story that made them do it.
All I'm saying is people come here to be heard and critiqued, not JUDGED! Those of you on your moral high horses need to not be surfing a site such as this or at the very least don't look for stories under tags you don't agree with. To say oh I like non consent stories but this is just way out there is ridiculous. Most would say any type of rape is sadistic but obviously enough people are drawn to it for it to be a popular tag.

Well then :P

Just to clear things up, this was written for an erotic horror contest on another site. I had to go out of my element to write this since this isn't usually how I write.
Okay:
1. The tags were pretty straightforward; crime, blood. If you had any brains at all, you wouldn't have read it once you saw that it would be something you didn't like.
2. Once you got to a part you didn't like, how many of you stopped reading? I gurantee everyone of you proceeded to read the rest of the story before telling me that it was garbage.
3. The idea itself may suck, but saying the whole thing is "garbage" and a "piece of shit" is just rude.
4. If someone takes my words to heart, then they were just a sick ass bastard. In my story, I did not say "hey go do this cause its fun." No, I didn't tell anybody to do this, so there are not "words to take to heart."
5. To the person who managed to spell anonymous wrong even though it is right beneath the comment box: erotic is any sex performed. The guy had sex with her, maybe it wasn't consensual, but it was still sex, therefore, erotic.
Overall, don't be a stupid dumbass when commenting on something that you honestly could have stopped reading at any point. Don't like what you see? There is a back button specifically for that purpose. This is a horror story, and it is erotic. Hence the placement in this category.
And, I am sure that half of the people who have read this, maybe even some of the ones that commented, had their dick out or their hands down their pants and just don't want to accept that they are some sick fucks. If you do not like it, suck it up, fuck off, and read something else

Clunky

Not a great story regardless of what happens to the main character. Clunk, clunk, clunk.

yum

Loved it .

That was awful....(What happened, not the story....)

And also yes....'Nonconsentual' is the definition of rape...-_-'
That is why there is a whole catagory of nonconsentual literiture on here.
I actually think the whole nonconsentual fetish is more-so just being in a rape-like situation. That's what it is for me. I think being in a consentual rape-like situation would be totally hot, but actually being raped would be beyond awful. It's kind of like the whole BDSM fetish, but a little different.

LOVED IT!

Omg. It was awful (what happened) but it was so SEXY! Damn I hope there is more stories like this. I felt sorry for the girl:( awful guy. But it was so SEXXXXY!!!!!