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To the Palace Ch. 02

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by ResidentWeavil09/25/12

A little short

I like this story but I do like reading in bigger chunks. Guess I will have to deal with it.

The editing is a little awkward. I think there was a scene change where Cindy was introduced but the lines read as if it was one continuous one.

Looking forward to finding out more about these mysterious mind manipulating madams.

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