Ridden by Red Riding Hood

Great story!!! Poor editing

Lord that was hot, but was distracted by the spelling and grammar errors

Hot Story

I read it too. Voted it high, It was hot. Guess I'm a dummy tho... I wasn't distracted by any errors except the word almost spelled almos - not saying there weren't others, I just wasn't distracted by anything or saw anything that jumped out at me, so I voted it high.
I enjoyed it and got a nice wank-off to it.
I post anonymous because I'm not a member. - Names Steven.

Grammar

Good, but spelling and grammar, dude.

I second grammar

I agree, it's good, but grammar, spelling and punctuation need work. Maybe have two people read/edit next time. It's usually useful I find, to read the story aloud; this helps catch any mistakes as well. Otherwise, nice work! Makes me want to be Red this year ;)

Not bad...

Aside from the grammer, LOVED IT!!!! I would love to see a sequel. Do they get to meet again next year?

I was waiting for a twist at the end and it never really came. Fun, though.

Gobble Gobble

I thought there would be more gobble. After the Big Bad Wolf says" I'm going to eat you, gobble, gobble, gobble!"

good story

Great job. She should have sucd him off tho.