All Comments on 'Not As Naive As You Think Ch. 02'

I want her to see more of Ashton too!!!! LOL

Looking forward to more, but you really need to proof read.

screw it. post more and soon. we all know good gramar from bad but waiting weeks for new stuff sucks. strike while your hot and you have good charter flow!

Just wish it had been longer, I hope you post the next chapters soon.

I really like this story so far and really wish this chapter was longer!! can't wait for the next chapter! :)

I'm enjoying the story too. It's so good I don't care about the grammar or spelling mistakes either. LOL

Just post! LOL! You had me so tightly wound up, that I didn't notice anything... so post already!

I can't wait to read more, but please make the chapters longer

good story and cant wait to read your next chapter..can u please make it longer. ? do u know y ur story was at the end of another story? i was just askin

Your story is enchanting. I am really enjoying it. I hope that you will consider longer chapters but go at your own pace. I will read anyway. Anxiously awaiting your next post.

XOXO

I didn't realize my story was the end to another one. I guess it was just by coincidence. But hopefully chapter three will be out soon and longer.

Next chapter please

This chapter had more flow to it than the first and I got more of a sense of the characters. I'd like to see a little deeper than trash talking party girl and reluctant tag along friend, though.

I'd also like to know why she can sense weres and how it is she doesn't know that she is one herself ( or at least I assume she is, since she has to suppress the part of herself that is drawn to Ash). Was she adopted, orphaned?

Looking forward to a little more back story while you continue to progress the storyline. So far, I like it!

Just found this story.....please continue it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Just wandering when its coming

Seems to me that you are one of those authors that is going to make their fans wait months on end for each chapter now. That's happening with a lot of the authors now. Looks like its going to be a frequent thing now which sucks a lot

dont make us wait for more

cant wait to know what happeneds next i keep checking in but only to get dissapointed. :( hopefully soon. fingers crossed!!

Hey, good read. Looking forward to seeing ur other chapters keep it up. I tak her Asena is the alphas mate or has a dormant wolf heritage. Looking out or the answers n surprises.

A pitty, was a good story while it lasted.

Next chapter please

i JUST got so rapped up in this that I did not see that is was this short.....'

I would like to see more......PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please can we have more I mean talk about a cliffhanger!!! Please what happens next

Ok, this is good so far where is the rest please? Yes I know real life and other stuff happen but I am looking forward to you posting the next chapter of this story.

This story would work so much better if you hadn't written the two females as such complete sluts. Why did you do that? They sound like skanky inner-city whores.