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Fallen Angel

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by Anonymous

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by demure10109/22/12

The road, probably -

the hell of your own making couldn´t be outdone by any other´s...

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by tazz31709/22/12

DESCRIPTIVE NARRATION

by a lost soul and weary traveler, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by twelveoone09/23/12

would help

for a little more flesh on the poetic bones, what i'm getting is some fallen angel going nowhere, and i generally have an overactive imagination
4ed

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