All Comments on 'Internet Meetup'

I rather the story be told in...first or third person, second person all the "you's and your's" is kind of annoying it's like someone is telling me about a fantasy or what ever i can't explain, i just can't read it.

When the next escapade is going to happen as well. Very nicely written. Hopefully is there is another they won't be as nervous in the beginning.

wet panty rating out of 10? 1000000000000000000 ♥

Your writing sucks.