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LOTS OF MEMORIES AND VIBES
are given off to those receptives, TK U MLJ LV NV
If only
the world worked that way... Very nice!
This was written
exactly as it happened. ... Now your next clue ...yes Virgina, there is a Santa Claus ...Who am I?
..
Thanks so verry much for the comment!!
Posted this already but cant see it so...
Great engineering 7-5-7 as it should be and with the word Lust that I think acts as an effective Kireji balancing strangness implied in the first line with familarity in the final line. I feel if you included a Kigo, then spring would be ideal, but this is of course optional in the modern form and being about love and lust I would argue it links to the heritage of natural things underpinning the japaneese origins and somehow adding an addition aspect of completeness (the point of this site notwithstanding)
All in all a pleasure to read.
Was it a challange to formulate?
Oops
I meant 5-7-5 of course .,. cant seem to edit comments after posted.. will have to rmember that,
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