All Comments on 'The Bar'

by kjplotts

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deliciousthoughtsdeliciousthoughtsover 11 years ago
5 stars

just loved it :)

BahamaBahamaover 11 years ago
Amazing

This deserves more than five stars. More please

CarlisleCarlisleover 11 years ago
Hot Hot Hot

One of the hottest stories I've read.Definitely 5 out of 5

elle_9549elle_9549over 11 years ago

Very hot, and I hope to read more about them. :) ~ L

newjaynenewjayneover 11 years ago
Amy and Sam

are people we all need to hear more about. Good writing - hot story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Not much character development

And some issues like: "inaudible sounds". Sexy, though. Keep writing!

rsilkrsilkover 9 years ago
A great sensual story. I enjoyed it.

Lucky Sam and Amy!

HogwashHogwashabout 9 years ago
That is one hell of a story

Your writing is ... active. Fabulous work. The story just jumped off the page.

Thank you very much!

koala011860091koala011860091about 9 years ago
Great seduction

I loved the build-up and how she worked her seduction - wish more authors took time to build up the characters like this. Hope to see more.

LcnmdLcnmdabout 9 years ago
Really good, but....

A really good story, the build up was wonderful! Unfortunately, the sex was just sex; and not much more!

More depth would be great ...

L

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Norrmally, I like more buildup, but....

this one just had so much heat that it worked out right. Well done!!!

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 8 years ago

A very well written and hot short story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

would like to see another one episode of this. I like it.

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