All Comments on 'A Long Ride Home'

Short, sweet and quick. Pretty darned hot for a first time attempt. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future

Enjoyed your first story. Please keep writing

This was a very short, and exhilarating story. I was excited, and anticipating more from the very beginning. Did you work with an editor prior to submitting? There are a few typos and some inconsistencies that could have easily been worked out that would have made it so much more believable. It was very erotic and a wonderful read, please keep writing. I look forward to your next post.

Another please!!!!

really good story thank you, helped my bus ride too xxx