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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone09/24/12

arranged this way

Oh, to lie upon the silk waterfall of your hair,
your inner walls shielding me from the icy air,
my limbs upon your limbs, our fingers intertwined,
our souls repaired. Looks a little bare.
you can get away with this format, with the contrasting thought
didn't vote

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by demure10109/24/12

But then,

emaotions can be a little bare, cut down to their essentials.

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by tazz31709/25/12

1ST CUM....1ST SERVED

and we shall so remain, TK U MLJ LV NV

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