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On The A-Train

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by Anonymous

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by Scotsman6909/26/12

Fine writing

Thank you

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by Anonymous09/26/12

I second that.

Thanks for the well-written story. I look forward to more!

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by Kelly21304/01/13

Great Story

I especially liked your reference to Erica Jong.
Just two minor edits. 1. There are no shelves on the A train. 2. Even if there were, no one would leave anything valuable on them. LOL

But otherwise this is one of the nicer stories because it is very erotic, but not in-your-face and because it is well written.

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