by JonfromEssex
Thank you, JonfromEssex - I have really enjoyed reading Chapters 1 and 2. You have me eagerly awaiting Chapter 3 now - very well done! It's hard to believe such a polished piece was a first effort; I wish I could write half as well!
Keep up the good work.
Amazing story, and I think much hotter than chapter one. I actually bookmarked your account so I could see once the second chapter was posted, because I could tell from the first it would be good. Please get chapter 3 out soon!