Purile illiterate rubbish, and that was the good part!
Certainly was disappointing . If there is a part 2 I hope it includes major revenge.
This story is too short and lacks enough detail or development to make it interesting. Also, BDSM is consensual. This story might be a better fit in the nonconsensual category.
Boring, ignorant, and completely lacking the slightest tinge of eroticism.
Could have been good, but WAY too short and no need for the harsh side. It could have been very erotic.
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