All Comments on 'In Reverse Pt. 01'

There was no mention of her being on birth control.

Audi certainly won't forget her first time. Looking forward to Chap.2.

Please write more. Loved the characters and pace.

If your dream is to write professionally, you should pursue it vigorously. You are very talented. Good luck.

This story was one of the most well-written stories I have read on this site. There are no jarring grammatical errors and scene breaks are used where they are required.

Best of all, the tension built between the Mike and Audi actually has substance. I can feel the awkwardness of their first meeting. Seems like this story deserves an ending though.

Very erotic. Very well played out, honest, real, oh and erotic, very. Where's part 2?

I was emotionally spent by the time I finished reading; waiting for part 2 with bated breath (and a raging hard on).

Thank you for this beautifully written piece.

The anxiety and insecurity of a wallflower are portrayed with an honesty that pulled me in. It also nicely showed how a man may want the less glamorous of two unique women.

Sure curious where this story will go in followup chapters

Such a hot story! Needs a part 2.

How sad, this was written years ago and there is no part two. A fantastically written 5 star plus story.