All Comments on 'Happy to Be Home'

I didn't know black women could have white asses hahaha, wrong tags....I think their race switched half the way through.

White ass? 2 possible explanations. 1. Unless she was really ashy or 2. She was a Trinidadian of Indian descent. Even then her ass still wouldn't be white. Hmmm

Anyhoo!! Interesting story.

The grammatical and other errors made it difficult to immerse myself in your story, but not bad. Take time to have someone else read it before submitting since it's easy to overlook mistakes in your own writing.

You wrote her as a fluffy haired woman from trinidad with a white ass, and never really describe him, but he's got a brown dick....odd.

Black woman with a white ass, and white man with a brown dick? Are you sure about that?

anyway...good story yaar...