All Comments on 'In the Adirondack Clouds'

great, lovely - and hard to stomch. Thank you very much!

Wow - This takes graphic to a whole new level.

The choice of like 'claw' and 'mauling' is what makes this unusual and powerful.

I like the use of water in the beginning and end too. The title is also an interesting choice.

Two silver manes

regard a babbling brook.

She reaches into his lap,

with an arthritic liver-spotted claw,

ended well too

whether to reminesce or re live a past time. TK U MLJ LV NV

Except for this thing I have about the word "cunt," except perhaps where there's anger or catharsis, this is one of your best.