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Very Interesting!
I thought the mating ritual was odd for a human, but then the end made everything clear.
hilarious!
This was very entertaining, thanks for writing!
Nice
Figured out your characters weren't human. Still enjoyed what was a surprise ending. A few misspellings also caught my eye. Nonetheless, well done.
thank you
thank you for your kind words this was a fun one to write i i will probably get it edited and re post soon
thank you
Dab10
WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OK..............WTF IS WRONG WITH YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey, a story about my x-wife!
Beautiful!
WOW ! About two weeks after I read this story for the first time, I saw two Praying Mantas's mating - - the same thing happened !!! I had to read this story again .Great story writting, I love your style - please KEEP writing !!
CarCam
Loved this
Very hot and perfect ending.
VERY creative !
well done
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