All Comments on 'Rina Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
hot

really hot!! more

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
yes definitely more.

A good read with enough meat to hold your interest..

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
removed her cloths

"cloths"???

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
great read

More please!!!! Great story thus far..... can't wait to hear what's next

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Ehhh??

The whole incest angle is pretty unnecessary for the story. At least you could have made Tia as a step-daughter and it would have been less creepy, but you didn't, 2-stars.

mjb196898mjb196898over 10 years ago
Chpt 3

Yes, please keep this series going..... there are so many possibilities!!

cap5356cap5356about 10 years ago
wow

hot story cant hardly wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Insanely Predictable

As if you couldn't see that coming a mile off.

Insanely predictable,,, sorry

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