All Comments on 'Bet You Didn't See That One Coming'

Your piece was amazing, funny, entertaining and I just LOVED it. TWO THUMBS UP BOO!! <3

Xoxo,

Nightingale

I do so love a good role playing story but I have to say it didnt see that one coming

I sure didnt see it....night need smelling salts after this one

I LOVED IT!!!!!!

lol I liked it though.

...And I loved the "time to update your resume"! I've been wanting an ending like that in a story for-ever, lol! But no, I never saw the ACTUAL ending coming, and it was perfect. Luv your stories <3

I wanted to say that it was a great story and I really enjoyed it. However removing the Non-consent tag would make more people read your story, I believe. Their is enough bad non-consent stories in this section which makes some people who enjoy a good story skim over this one. I really enjoy this one because on this site very rarely you see a consensual bondage story.

...and I really didn't see that coming, a great supprise ending ! Twisted with a dogleg off to the left ending. Well done