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Shattered Boundaries Ch. 10

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/28/12

LOL

You are such a tease.

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by WalksAtDusk09/29/12

:)

Lol yeah, sorry about that. This chapter was more meant to set up the next sequence than stand alone, but I was already way behind schedule so I put it up to make the wait seem a little shorter

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by Anonymous10/12/12

great fun

in the buildup. hope you have a good development in mind :)

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by Anonymous11/24/12

very well written

Story and a highly interesting plot. I can't think of anything you could improve, so i'll. Just add myself to the 'please put up the next chapter very soon' petition

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by TBone5804/10/13

great story

i'm loving this story...any idea of when chapter 11 might show up?

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by JackorChuck06/03/13

Greatly Enjoyed

I gave you five stars for each chapter and look forward to the continuation of this series. You are a good writer and have provided an interesting slant that seperated this from other post appocalypse stories.

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by Anonymous04/04/14

I gave you five!

I truly hope that you continue this story, there's very few good science fiction/fantasy series on this site and it would be a shame if you gave up on this excellent story!

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by Wlljam03/06/15

LOVED IT!

It took a bit to get into... but when I did I couldn't stop! Give yourself a great big pat on the back.

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by Anonymous02/27/17

So Sorry it's not done

2017... found this and started it not realizing...The Author did not get a chance to finish...A sad day when life throws its' curve balls...oh well such is what we call life.

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