Assertive, with Racy Acidity

This is gorgeous.
The only quibble is the "bone dry" in the final line. I can't imagine there would be anything dry about this..uhm, event.

5ed

not the audience for this,
so i would object to
lips, lips, lips, lips, lips
for some strange reason bone dry did not bother me, but here it's not used as the new cliche.
BTW assume you saw the others, I'm mightily impressed, remind me of some other guy i would always tip my hat to

commented before but it's not there!

i'll drink to this. its fruity notes sit well on my palate

FLAVORS AND SMELLS

can be changed with chemistry. TK U MLJ LV NV

Unlike 1201, I liked "lips, lips, lips, lips, lips," given the title, but I agree with Desejo about "bone dry" because of the peaches that follow until a wine connoisseur tells me otherwise.

And that my friends

works for any vintage

Beautiful

thank you!

Yummy

gooseberries. Makes the reader tingle with sense imagery.

*****

Someone has been reading Tom Stevenson.

Five.