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Nice & intriguing... open to a pleasant number of interpretations!
heart-tuggingly
wistful !!
5
for craft, started reading it, almost looked like a new writer, started wondering why the sonics are so good, whoops, not my cup of tea
the poet tried
THAT MOVIE STARTED A CULT
and the list goes on and on and on...etc TK U MLJ LV NV
hope sloshes eternally
and too many of us wear undergown galoshes
loved this
Smooth as silk
I sort of agree with 1201 in that I'm not overly fond of poems that put the poet forward in the writing, but this is so wry and well written that you've made it work. xo
*****
Five.
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