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The Fragile Abandoned Ch. 03

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by ChasB09/30/12

So much was missed in fhis chapter - Andy's feelings of lust and guilt - the combined satisfaction the siblings shared at their long delayed merging - Natalie's relef at finally getting what she wanted so much. Only 3*.

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by Anonymous04/18/13

This author is great!

The writer is in his early 20s, and I'm sure he was hard when he wrote this excellent story, maybe even shot a good healthy load at the end. I'm glad that Andy busted his little sister's cherry and finally unloaded his big brotherly balls up Natalie's cute little coochie. I hope the boy'll do it again and again, but I'm not going to read any of the other chapters. I'm afraid that Andy'll distance himself from his little sis, get involved with other (inferior) twats, worry about his declining career. I want to remember these two brilliantly portrayed figures as I last saw them, with Andy's big fat veiny prick soaking in his little sister's cute little cunt.

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by clearedtofuck10/14/16

What a jerk

Without any warning, Andy thrust himself inside of me, ripping through my hymen, and filling me. It felt like he would split me in two and I yelped in pain.

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