All Comments on 'Our First Time'

A simple, sexy daydream with no strings attached. Good job.

That was some dream . More please

you have a wonderfully economic way with words and paint some great descriptions :)

Sexy, sensual, sweet, and very arousing ! And I love how it was all a daydream :)

Short and sweet. To the point. I liked the build up of tension and not too flowery. Well done

Very clever ending - I liked it