All Comments on 'The Arrangement Ch. 10'

Still very much in love with this story....was on pins and needles waiting for update. Keep it moving as you have time. I need to know that Clay gets what's coming to him. I believe he drugged Trisha a nd made her think they slept together. She was not like Rachel. And I think Jill's pregnant...what will see say when she finds out about Daniels secrets? Maybe Mistress J can work them out of him?

I can't believe this isn't finished! Please please come back!

Love your writing, hope you continue the story. :D

Great story. And, I do believe you took note of my communications since the last one. Happy to see it.

Looking forward to the next installment!

Just keeps getting better!!!

Only just found this story and I'm so glad I did. I love the characters, plot and your great writing style. Looking forward to more very soon. Please!!

I just found this story again---and was so pleased you'd added more chapters. Now I'm sooo hooked. But it looks like you've been writing other stories instead lately. I'm writing to implore you not to forget this one. The characters are so real! Thanks for posting your writings and I'm keeping my fingers crossed you'll get back to this one sooner than later!

Even if Trisha doesn't understand it herself, shouldn't someone else recognize the possibility of drug rape after hearing the details about the night with Clay and try to investigate? Like Simone who seem to know all? Hope Clay get back in spades for rape and injuring and hurting his former comrade's children.

I agree with the other comment. How does no one consider he drugged her? In this day and age? Don't insult your readers by thinking we'd believe that.

yes she was drugged

yes he is doing everything he can to make Daniel hurt by taking away the ones he loves

now it's time to move on

That's why they need to know about the pressure Trisha is under. He drugged her. It was in the wine.

Eh...how can even the characters--and especially the women--be so clueless as to let Trisha's admission escape them? It's obvious it was a date-rape drug. Minus 1 star for such an omission. Also, Daniel needs to get over his "secret" and torturing him and Jill needs to stop. Minus 1 star for continual, unneeded torture. 3