Dawn Rising

Really enjoyed this story. I hope you continue on! Fantastic writing.

wtf

To me it seemed you rushed the whole secrets coming out thing, seriously how could she forgive those fucks who deceived her, if people I ever cared about did that to me I would never forgive them, that is the deepest kind of betrayal there is. I mean come on, why did you make Alex such a weakling, she forgave them way to easily, she never really flipped out over all the lies and the fact that they nearly got her killed, twice because they thought they knew better than she did about herself and what she could handle.

At the end of chapter 26, she should have gone ape-shit and told them all to fuck themselves and that Lucian especially was a fucking asshat. She should have thrown in a good punch or two at her moron of a father and Lucian, you had her just fizzle out and she had no real coming to terms with everything.. Other than those issues, it was a decent bit of writing.

superb story

Just found this and read it all in two days. tried to give it 10 stars. an incredible read as far as i am concerned.